I loved your story! I really liked the fact that you added that they didn't plan to go to the Netherlands but ended up there.
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I really loved how you did added some other affects to your story and I like how you put in the numbers for the trains. Also I loved how you made them go on the other train.
I loved your story! I really liked the fact that you added that they didn't plan to go to the Netherlands but ended up there.
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ReplyDeleteI really loved how you did added some other affects to your story and I like how you put in the numbers for the trains. Also I loved how you made them go on the other train.
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