I’ve captured my family’s migration events in this historical fiction story. The most important thing I will always remember about migration is migration is a challenging thing, and most of the migration happened because of war.
I’m proud of my work because the ending is great, and It takes 5 minuits. And that shows me that I worked well. The importance of this work is that I worked so hard.I like this story because it is long, and long means I worked hard. The thing I will do different next time is to make the voice more clear.
When I heard your presentation I thought about how you had a very loud voice and I could hear you very clearly.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you did it was like a youtube video
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story because you were very creative. I think you can work on saying it slower
ReplyDeleteI liked how you made your words match the pictures and the way that you also put some funny animated ones. Is Oobong your grand father or related to you? You added some really strong adjectives which made me feel like I was there! In the beginning of your story it kind of reminded me of my great grand fathers story because he also loved to pick berries and flowers I just didnt mention it in my story.
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