I'm really proud of my migration story that I did using book creator. My favourite part of this project was colouring and making the photos for the story. It was a lot of fun! My story is about how my Great Great grandpa migrated from Haryana to Gwalior. Oh, and its not a video, its a true story.
I really liked how you put the writing on different sides of the page and I felt horrible when Mira's friends ditched her.
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ReplyDeleteI liked how you had the showed me not tell. This story has a very strong connection of FREINDSHIP, I could easily tell the theme was friendship because they became friends and the old friend was always mailing. This connects to me because I really miss Ryan and we talk on Clash Royale to stay in touch just like the book.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you wrote the story because, that was the exact same thing that happened to me. Another thing I really enjoyed was the way you used show not tell.
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